Fitness crossfit Web Design Opinion

Person would like to give me your opinion about this landing page that I am developing, principally at the level of the hero section that I do not have great ideas, I started to apply the 8 point rule in the design to try to be more consistent, it continues with some errors but I am very badly satisfied with this design compared to the last.

https://www.figma.com/file/FqF4D9xDsA8NHajp0jIaQO/GMY?type=design&node-id=0%3A1&mode=design&t=wdPEWFjnjSbtWpzf-1
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