Improvments for my design
Hey Guys I just wanted to ask for your feedback on the design. Do you see any areas for improvement?
Please note that the text and images are currently just placeholders
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the text on top of the camel image is very hard to read
the tiny texts in "people" are absolutely impossible to read
for plenty of people, or mobile, this will be just a black blob
okay i will change that
is there anything else to improve?
in ux/ui terms, i couldn't find anything
maybe the weird mix of fonts at the top
but overall is it a good design
or bad
Honestly could use work, I can't tell what the company is from first glance
Is the company called 'Garden'? or is it a product about a garden? Either way, this is a generic corporate website I feel like
If the company is called Garden, why not incorporate the vibe of the company in the design? If it's about gardens, same thing -- why not incorporate some nature-type of things?
i try not to give subjective opinions
could you help me
How?
can you show how i can put more nature in it
or tell me
I'm not a designer and that's a tall task; you need to look up inspiration from other companies / magazines / media / anything that fits the vibe you're trying to go for
Fonts, colors, pictures, the tone of the text, etc
First thing I would do is try to establish what your company's vibe is. Pick out like 20-30 'feeling' words or words related to the company and put it down in a Figma file based off the words you wrote down. Then, make a moodboard in the Figma file and gather inspiration. Then try out fonts, colors, maybe some small pieces of text to set the tone of the writing and then make wireframes -> hi-fidelity mockups
where do you get your inspiration
You can get it from anywhere, other websites, videos, magazines, typography, movies etc etc
But I get a lot of it from Dribbble, Awwwards (sometimes), Pinterest
okay thanks
does it look more natural or worser
looks different
In a Bad or good way
just different
does this look better for you
Its a good start
nice
Guys where can I learn designing cause I always hate my design
Design is hard, I never really found one resource I really liked