An ebomb of mine is
[2022-11-11 12:49:07 PM] : An ebomb of mine is doing well on Reddit at the moment and I'd like to get a few more subs. Any quick ideas on how to improve this lead magnet? [File hidden by Slack limit]
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[2022-11-11 12:49:55 PM] : The ebomb is here and the lead magnet is before the "Refactoring" section: https://profy.dev/article/react-junior-code-review-and-refactoring-1
[2022-11-11 12:52:16 PM] : the “Why is that?” feels to me like it interrupts the emotion that’s built up from the first couple sentences
[2022-11-11 12:56:22 PM] : It might be helpful to explain what they’ll get out of it too. I think it could be reworked to something like
Getting your first job as a React developer is a nightmare. Lots of applications, no replies! But with a bit of experience you can change the game.
This mini course will give you real practice at job skills like X and Y. It’s free and you can start immediately.[2022-11-11 01:22:24 PM] : Thanks dceddia. In a previous version I mentioned a few skills but the pitch always turned out lengthy. Couldn’t figure it out. Your suggestion is much better. [2022-11-11 01:22:46 PM] : Let’s see. These changes should be live in a few minutes [File hidden by Slack limit] [2022-11-11 01:25:28 PM] : It’s crazy to see the traffic spikes that a large subreddit can cause btw [File hidden by Slack limit] [2022-11-11 01:37:33 PM] : it’s always such a hard balance to come up with a concise way to explain these things :sweat_smile: i feel like full-length pitches are almost easier than CTAs that way [2022-11-11 01:37:53 PM] : that’s an awesome spike! [2022-11-11 01:56:36 PM] : let us know how it goes :sunglasses: [2022-11-11 02:06:41 PM] : Yeah I agree that full-length pitches are much easier. I'm actually thinking of using a short teaser that links to a dedicated landing page for this lead magnet. Maybe users are more likely to click to the landing page and get hooked on the longer pitch. Not sure but I think jasonswett mentioned trying something like that. [2022-11-11 02:07:14 PM] : Anyway, I'll keep you posted about this ebomb :slightly_smiling_face: [2022-11-11 02:08:33 PM] : yeah! could try both, one that’s a teaser + link, another variation that’s basically this CTA + “[Learn more here] or sign up below.” to give people the option