nil Chapter 1 (A Roblox Creepypasta) - Roblox Forum
When I Woke Up
I Turned My Computer Back On
And Roblox Automatically Opened
And Loaded me into A Place Called nil
here's a ScreenShot
I was Totally Freaked out at This point I thought about quitting the job but right then My computer turned itself off so I took it back to the computer Shop And Instead Got a Windows 7 It worked better and Frankly It was not doing Things Itself So Then I Forwarded Myself to work Where I Saw Erik And Told Him about What Happened He Said It was Probably Just A Glitch So I Took His Word For it And begun The Bug Fixing Then I got A Email From Anonymous I Hesitantly Responded He Asked Where Do I live I Had Thought It Was Some Internet Troll So I Ignored it After That I Was Leaving Work Nothing Happened There Except The Servers Went Down As I Walked Home I Was Thinking about that Game Called nil Its Definitely Hiding a secret As I was less Than a mile away from my house I got another Email I Didn't Look At it This time But Then I Got 2 more I could see My House Down the Sidewalk And Then My phone Rang I Was Baffled Because I Didn't Give Anyone My Number I answered It Trying to tell Whoever it is to stop End Of Chapter 1 💎💎💎Free ROBUX💎💎💎
I was Totally Freaked out at This point I thought about quitting the job but right then My computer turned itself off so I took it back to the computer Shop And Instead Got a Windows 7 It worked better and Frankly It was not doing Things Itself So Then I Forwarded Myself to work Where I Saw Erik And Told Him about What Happened He Said It was Probably Just A Glitch So I Took His Word For it And begun The Bug Fixing Then I got A Email From Anonymous I Hesitantly Responded He Asked Where Do I live I Had Thought It Was Some Internet Troll So I Ignored it After That I Was Leaving Work Nothing Happened There Except The Servers Went Down As I Walked Home I Was Thinking about that Game Called nil Its Definitely Hiding a secret As I was less Than a mile away from my house I got another Email I Didn't Look At it This time But Then I Got 2 more I could see My House Down the Sidewalk And Then My phone Rang I Was Baffled Because I Didn't Give Anyone My Number I answered It Trying to tell Whoever it is to stop End Of Chapter 1 💎💎💎Free ROBUX💎💎💎
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I will force you into english class
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i speak english BOI
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whne h io wokwe up
i trunerd my cop muter back on
and rolox au toam mticaly openrd
a nd me into a ;place called nil
a n loadd m y to in a;
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i wa satrotally f;reaked eout ad rth i psoint and i thought about qicking my job but then my compuoter turnerf it self o ff
so i took it basckl the computer sh;p and istntead got a wind wos 7 AND IT worked better franlly it was nopt doing itself then i forwardede my tself to work where i shaw re and told hi m baout what happened she sd ais it wa s pr biobably just ag ltuich so i took his worked for it and boegegon the bughing fixing then i got an e mail from my ;an onamos i hesitstaitly rpesorende he asked where i leave i had tohught it was osme interente storll so i nogred it a d after that i was lraeaving workreed nothing happened excep t there down sererve er s
so I took it back to the com puter; sho p a;nd instead got a w ndo;s 7 it worked better and frankly it was not doing things itself so then I forwarded myself to work where I saw ;erik ;and told him ;abo u;t wh;at happ en d he said it wa s p ro b ably just a glitch s o I t ook his wo d for it and begun the bug fixing then I got a email from anonymous I hesitant ly respond ed he asked where do I live I had thought it was some int rnet tr oll so I ignored it after that I was leaving work nothing happened there except the servers went dow;
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as walk h om i was tyhi nk ging asbout t;e game called nil uit ide nfenitly hidign a scr eret i w as less than a m iele way with my house ai got another email i didnt look a thuis thi me; but then i got 2 c; o;more i could see my house down the sid ewa lk and thenwa my phon e rabni was baffelhed because i anyone my nunmber i answererd it trying to wv here it stop and chapter 1
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yea basically a short summary
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Add punctuation in the story, u don’t want ppl having a stroke reading this
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I know a lot of people said this, but this story could benefit a lot from punctuation. For example, this piece of text from your story.
This sentence is . We can fix this by adding punctuation.
By doing some tweaking, here is my result.
"I was totally freaked out. At this point, I thought about quitting my job. My computer then turn itself off, so I took it to a computer shop and buy a Windows 7 computer as a replacement."
This piece of text might not be grammatically correct, but it does a better job making your story easier to read.
In conclusion, there are some improvements to be made with your story. My main suggestion is to keep on writing. Practice can turn an unskilled person into a master.
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haha
bad englash
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You Made Me Pe in my Pant
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ok, ok guys next chapter will have the correct Punctuation
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Let me fix this bro
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dude, you know what. you need to write this story
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Its like 3am I just downed a mtn dew I'll try to finish this to the best of my ability from what i decipher from the original post
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First of all: Almost every words are capitalized, not everything is a proper name.
Second of all: Where is the punctuation?
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