15 Replies
- L21: [nit] Could remove comma in
and EPEL, for extra
- L46: Typo: diligitenlty -> diligently
- L46: Optional: bringing in modern -> bringing modern
- L52: Reminder - finish line: thanks to blah blah
- L78: Reminder - add link to vid [ vid ]
- L86: Reads weird following "and more" line above. Should this line be it's own sub/sub-sub heading somewhere as a call to action?
- L98: Do Delphic Melody or ahmedadan have artist pages to link to?
- L110: ya'll -> y'all
- L145: so if find them file them - intentional grammar? vs so if you find them, file them
- L145: here are some things that won't be coming with, consider ; instead of ,
- L147: Imagine that our final goal is that LTS, GTS, and stable is just a slider in an update page in a control panel, they should feel and act the same consider something like Imagine choosing between LTS, GTS, and stable with just a slider on an update page in a control panel, they should feel and act the same as each other or LTS, GTS and stable should feel and act the same as each other - [imagine|think of them] as options on a slider within an update page
- L153: Also this is the new installer you'll love it consider rephrasing or possibly adding punctuation e.g. Also this is the new installer - you'll love it
@j0rge Just did a brief read through. Completely up to you if you want to change stuff - especially the "consider" points. I think keeping your personality in there is probably the most important thing when deciding on actions.ack, thanks
do you have a github handle for creditr
https://github.com/waffles-dev - though don't feel like you have to credit me at all, this wasn't much 🙂
you can also PR inflight PRs
we get a badge. 😄
oh sweet
That's really cool - I've only really used bitbucket (for work), so far GH has just been a place for me to chuck a few things.
I'll PR on top if you don't mind
I fixed it
but the way you can do it
if you see something you can go like this
click and hold/drag the plusses on the thing you want to edit
then click the +/- icon
then just make your changes
then you change whatever
then I can click a button and github figures it out
ahhh ok
that's like bitbucket too
nice
@j0rge - wrong waffles sorry
I had to tag -dev on the end, that guy beat me to the tag by a million years haha
oops I think someone needs to fix that with the cli
nws