[SOLVED] Game Review

So i want to start somehwere with a game review but idk where to start The game is basically a visual novel game I already started a script but for me it kinda sucks since it feels kinda long but nonsense i need a little advice on how to make a vn game review and how do i tell the whole story but in a condensed form but also makes it make sense.
4 Replies
Neptune
Neptune4mo ago
i know it feels confusing so if so you can tell me whats the problem
D1RTYJESTER
D1RTYJESTER4mo ago
Aw man youd jus have to really find a way to numb it down like how you would in IRL in a quick convo
Neptune
Neptune4mo ago
what do u mean? Do i need to smplify it?
D1RTYJESTER
D1RTYJESTER4mo ago
yes in best way possible might not get every detail but it might be better to comprehend