feel like I’m very close to figuring out this fit, but it feels like it’s missing something

This has died in the drafts many times and I feel good enough about this iteration to wear it out today, but it still feels 90% of the way there. Any ideas?
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feel like I’m very close to figuring out this fit, but it feels like it’s missing something - mfad