Is this an ok speaker bio?
Zach is a web evangelist, conference speaker, Google developers Melbourne organiser, CSS Expert and leader of Melbourne CSS. His mission is to make the web faster, more engaging, and easier to understand.
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why do you talk about yourself in the third person ?
I think it's convention so that they can copy paste it into their platform
and I would put both the Melbourne related things next to one another
good idae
something like :
Zach is a web evangelist, CSS Expert, conference speaker, organizer at Google developers Melbourne, and leader of Melbourne CSS.and the second sentence sounds off, for some reason
put CSS expert closer? ok
put what you are before what you do when describing yourself
He makes the web faster, more engaging, and easier to understand.
it's missing the sens of on going process
like it's not something you are doing right now but will stop next week because you'll be done
He is making the web faster, more engaging, and easier to understand
He's making the web faster, more engaging, and easier to understand.
Striving to make the web faster, more engaging and easier to understand."aiming to make" would work too but I feel like it's just that bit too much and that would sound too much like Kevin's intro XD
Working to make the web faster, more engaging and easier to understand sounds less buzzwordy to me, what do you think
nvm
I might just skip it
First part is long enough for a short bio
I'm not sure I would use "working" in that context, it's not incorrect but it doesn't convey the same vibe if that makes sense
yea